Last week, you outlined your argumentative essay. This week, you must use your instructor’s feedback and information from the course materials to turn your outline into an essay draft. Weekly instructor guidance and Chapters 1, 2, and 3 in the course text, College Writing Handbook, will walk you through the process.
The Week 3 assignment is the first draft of your academic argument. In this assignment, you will show that you are making progress in all course learning outcomes:
Integrate relevant source material effectively and ethically.
Support a position appropriate to the rhetorical situation.
You will submit a 3- to 4-page (1,000 to 1,250 words) rough-draft essay that is formatted in proper APA style. This rough draft assignment must integrate prior feedback and show improvement from your prior coursework. The rough draft will be evaluated differently than a final draft essay, so pay close attention to the grading rubrics and requirements.
Your argument should be sound, valid, and based upon evidence from at least 5 credible sources. At least 3 of your sources must be scholarly. You may integrate additional information, since your final draft requires additional research. Information and evidence must be integrated appropriately, cited in APA-style, and used with integrity. Remember to draft your essay for an academic audience.
NOTESS **Can you please use the corrections in the outline toward the essay. Also, the paper needs 5 total sources, 3 scholarly, 2 from anywhere. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Requirements: 3-5 pages not including title/reference page (1000 words)
Answer preview
The intervention approach is based on the precept that victims deserve protection and fairness. It recognizes that victims of sexual assault are quite vulnerable, and as such, discourages other service persons from engaging in victim-blaming (Vukotich, 2013). Besides helping put an end to victim shaming and blaming, the intervention approach also presents an opportunity for the Department of Defense to change the cultural norms within the military, which created a viable environment for the prevalence of sexual assault. Under this approach, sexual assault will be categorized not only as a crime but also as a form of exploitation for vulnerable service persons, and as such, will warrant mitigation and intervention (Obama Administration Archives, 2013). Finally, the intervention approach will help transform
