Correct the essay and rewrite the bad part
Correct the paper. My teacher already pointed out the bad part of the essay and i wish i can get higher grade. I will upload the 2 article which will be use in this paper so you can improve the content and some of the detail.
Please read the two article and add some details and contents thanks!
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20180316053251campbell_beyond_the_five_paragraph_essay 20180316053255crw_project_2_directions1 20180316053239jenkins_accordions__frogs__and_the_5paragraph_theme 20180316053226wu__yimin_w2gr70
Answer PreviewBack when I was in high school, I used to have so much trouble working on my essays. I
was always good at coming up with essay ideas but failed on how to organize my thoughts.
There is this one time where my teacher gave me a low grade because according to him, I was
repeating the same mistakes over and over again and therefore, decided to improve my easy writing through following the teacher’s instructions…
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