need to peer review other’s ap assignment

Advocacy Project Peer Review Round #1 For this assignment I’d like you to read each of your assigned peer reviews, offering any notes you see fit with the sticky note tool. You can make any comments you like, but you should be on the lookout especially for aspects of the paper that are confusing to you, or require more explanation. Then, in the larger “Comments” area, answer the following questions:

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Peer review 1

1. The specific problem addressed in the paper based on the introduction

Videogames is a crucial source of information to the young people and fail to address the negative implications of the actions represented. There is no complex and thoughtful thesis on a possible solution in the introduction.  If I made one recommendation on the introduction paragraph, I would suggest that you include a clear statement of the problem and solution as done in the rest of the paper.

2. How does the author provide some historical background for the problem

The author includes a historical context…

 

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