I need two papers the first one is the Personal Statement & the other one is Disadvantage Status Statement. These two papers are going to be a part of my dental application for dental schools. The story of my life and how I became interested to be a dentist can be found in the files named personal statement and disadvantage status that are both attached. There are other files attached that would help you with the rubrics and guidelines those file names start with rubric to help you find them. These two papers are written by me in my own words/writing style; I am not a native speaker and you’ll find a lot of issues including grammar and punctuation with the writing that needs to be resolved. These two papers need to be REWRITTEN and condensed in your own words. If you feel there are unnecessary stuff that doesn’t help/make sense please take them all off. If there are things which are not written according to the guidelines please remove them.There are parts that are plagiarized that needs to be removed. There are guidelines and instructions in the other files attached that needs to be followed accordingly.
As mentioned in GUIDLINES personal statement is a one-page essay (not to exceed 4,500 characters, including spaces, carriages, numbers, letters, etc.) that gives dental schools a clear picture of who you are and, most importantly, why you want to pursue a career in dentistry. Disadvantage status is a one-page essay (not to exceed 4,500 characters, including spaces, carriages, numbers, letters, etc.)
Please remove any repetition (by repetition I mean using same words and sentences) in personal statement and disadvantage status. The final version needs to be reviewed by me and it may need some touch ups that we can go over together.
Please feel free to contact me anytime and share any comments or questions that help the papers look better.
PLUS I don’t care if it is single space/one or two pages since both need to be 4500 CHARACTERS. Unfortunately studypool doesn’t let me go to the next page without filling out that portion so ignore that.
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An essential aspect of the dentistry profession that intrigues me is that it is a hands-on career, and this is something that I look forward to doing. Another issue is that I want to achieve is that one day I will transform my community in Iran by opening a dental clinic with qualified assistants and licensed professionals. During my upbringing in Iran, there was one horrible moment where bombs ambushed my neighborhood from the Iraqi planes. The war limited the way of life of many Iranians and especially school children like me. Many survivors suffered critical tooth injuries, and this made me realize that there lacked adequate oral health facilities for taking care of such cases. I also figured that there was a neglect of oral health and practices in most of the Middle Eastern countries. Therefore, from these experiences, I believe that pursuing the dentistry career will be a dream comes true. The challenges that I have encountered such as war, homelessness, and lack of finances are my motivators in disguise. While working and studying hard, I have managed to volunteer as an assistant at Riverside free dental clinic to help underserved families get dental care. The learning process in this facility has been inspiring, and as a future dentist, my objective is to assist low-income families who cannot afford dental
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