World War II .

Write a Speech On World War 2 and its heroes.

It should only be of five minutes meaning not more than 1 and a half page

 

here is the grading criteria

Make sure it has the following elements

thank you

 

Criterion

 Rating

Excellent

 Rating

Good

 Rating

Satisfactory

 Rating

Needs Improvement

 Score
Points 5 Points 4 Points 3 Points 2
Introduction (1) Gets attention

(2) Clearly identifies topic

(3) Establishes credibility

(4) Previews the main points

 Meets any three of the four criteria Meets any two of the four criteria Meets only oneof the four criteria
Body Main points are clear,

well supported, and

sources are documented

 Main points are

somewhat clear,

some support, and

some documentation

 Main points

need clarity

and support

lack of

sources and

documentation

 Main points

are not clear

and have no support

and no sources or documentation
Conclusion (1) Reviews main points

(2) Brings closure

(3) Memorable

 Reviews main points , brings

closure

 Brings closure Does not bring closure; the audience is left hanging
3 2 1 0.5
Eye Contact Eye contact with audience virtually all the time (except for brief glances at notes) Eye contact with audience less than 80% of the time Eye contact with audience less than 75% of the time Little or no eye contact
Clarity and Use of Language Use of language contributes to effectiveness of the speech, and vocalized pauses

(um uh er etc.)

not distracting Speaks clearly and distinctly all the time with no mispronounced words

 Use of language does not have negative impact, and vocalized pauses

(um uh er etc.)

not distracting

Speaks clearly and distinctly nearly all the time with no more than one mispronounced word

 Use of language causes potential confusion, and/or vocalized pauses

(um uh er etc.)

are distracting Speaks clearly and distinctly most of the time withno more than two mispronounced words

 Use of language is inappropriate

Often mumbles or can not be understood with more than three mispronounced words
Body language Body language, gestures, and facial expressions

adds greatly to the message

 Body language,

gestures, and facial

expressionscompliment message

 Body language,

facial expressionsand gestures

lack variety and spontaneity

 Body language, gestures, and

facial expressions are lacking or inappropriate
Topic is specific, follows assignment

Adapted to audience

 Topic is specific,

appropriate and

adapted

 Topic is clear appropriate and

somewhat adapted

 Topic lacks clarity

and focus

needs adapting to

audience

 No specific purpose–inappropriate for

audience or

occasion

Answer preview

These are among the many reasons we all respect this day, where we leave aside all the activities we would be doing, to come and gather together here to give honor for our trues heroes and faithful soldiers, whom without them, we may not imagine where our country would be at the moment. They gave hope to our lives and the lives of generations to come. If the would be a way to compensate our heroes fully, we would genuinely do that. They brought back the joy and peace to our nation. As I conclude, I will appreciate you all for joining us celebrate this day in honoring our heroes.

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